OOPS - this should have read If you have room to make the web address under
" For Vermont History and
Genealogy" on the first page, LARGER........ ;-) Guess I need to proofreed
my comments, too!
----- Original Message -----
From: "Mensch Family" <mensch.family(a)verizon.net>
To: <vtgen(a)rootsweb.com>
Sent: Sunday, May 02, 2010 9:33 PM
Subject: Re: [VTGEN] VTGenWeb brochure - like? not like? suggestions?
Hi Barb,
Thank you so much! I am glad to see that I am not the only person who
questions whether periods and commas should be used after urls. When
writing reports, I typically enclose them inside of < >. But, the space
allowance for slender brochure lines, combined with lengthy urls, doesn't
really allow for the extra marks. I have removed them from the brochure.
I have the web address under "For Vermont History and Genealogy" on the
first page - I think - at least the way that I tried folding the brochure.
Is the page with the VTGenWeb and logo picture at the top the front page,
or
am I mistaken?
I am in your debt.
--Ann
-----Original Message-----
From: vtgen-bounces(a)rootsweb.com [mailto:vtgen-bounces@rootsweb.com] On
Behalf Of Tony & Barb Vellturo
Sent: Sunday, May 02, 2010 3:20 PM
To: vtgen(a)rootsweb.com
Subject: Re: [VTGEN] VTGenWeb brochure - like? not like? suggestions?
Hi Ann,
Great job - like Paul, very minor "thoughts".
1. If you have room to make the web address under " For Vermont History
and
Genealogy" on the first page, that would make it more visible.
2. I have stopped using periods (in sentences) after web addresses - eg
http://usgwarchives.net/vt/vtfiles.htm. If one copies the whole thing,
including the period, the link wont work........
How's THAT for "nit-picking"?? ;-) Nice brochure! Barb
----- Original Message -----
From: "Mensch Family" <mensch.family(a)verizon.net>
To: <vtgen(a)rootsweb.com>
Sent: Sunday, May 02, 2010 1:49 PM
Subject: Re: [VTGEN] VTGenWeb brochure - like? not like? suggestions?
> Hi Paul,
>
> You are so kind for taking the time to do this!!!
>
> I made the changes that you suggested, and posted the updated .pdf. You
> were absolutely correct! As soon as I enlarged the page 1 icon, I
> realized
> that it had, indeed, been disproportionately small. Thank you so much!
>
> If you see anything else, or have any other suggestions, please do fire
> away. I honestly will NOT be upset by criticism. It is certainly
> superior
> to discovering, too late, that there was a glaring problem and it has
> already been seen by everyone else. ;-)
>
> With gratitude,
> --Ann
>
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: vtgen-bounces(a)rootsweb.com [mailto:vtgen-bounces@rootsweb.com] On
> Behalf Of Paul DesTroismaisons
> Sent: Sunday, May 02, 2010 10:58 AM
> To: vtgen(a)rootsweb.com
> Subject: Re: [VTGEN] VTGenWeb brochure - like? not like? suggestions?
>
>
> Hi Ann,
> Are you sure you want me to proof read your brochure? haha
> I did go over it with a fine tooth comb and could only come up with a
> couple
> minor suggestions.
> Other than that, you did a really great job, really professional look.
> On page one, I think the USGenWeb icon could be a little larger and on
> page
> 2, the USGenWeb icon should be
> centered within that column and that's it.
> /Paul
>
> Hello Everyone,
>
>
>
> The states have been asked to submit brochures which could be handed out
> at
> genealogical conferences, etc.
>
>
>
> I have tried to put together a tentative brochure for VTGenWeb. It is
> currently posted
>
> at [
1]http://www.rootsweb.ancestry.com/~vtgenweb/Brochure2-VTGenWeb.pdf .
> If
> you have free moment, and do not mind doing so,
>
> I would truly appreciate any input - Like? Don't like? Suggestions?
> Typos?
>
>
>
> Thank you so much!
>
>
>
> With appreciation,
>
> --Ann Mensch
>
> VTGenWeb
>
>
>
>
>
>
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