On 2017-09-04 09:49, Timothy Stowell wrote:
Wayne,
First of all thanks for your input for those of us who are not students of
English.
My comments below *[and in red and bold if it will show]*.
On Sun, Sep 3, 2017 at 9:12 PM, W Saewyc <wayne(a)saewyc.ca> wrote:
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> However, I am a bit OCD about English, so I have a few nits to pick.
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Thanks, but it would be much easier if we could all see the text (and
edit in real time) because it is quite hard to visualize changes sometimes.
I have created a piratepad of the text, and will begin updating it with
my suggestions and the changes you have made (if I understand them
correctly.) Everyone can see and edit the text at the same time. The
software tracks who made what changes; just add your name (upper-right
corner in desktop browsers.)
The url is:
http://piratepad.net/q1ksej7mSE
Wayne Saewyc
Marshall County